(This one's a bit of an experiment pushing my own writing comfort zone regarding characterization and some stylistic matters. The subject matter is also one I've not heavily read up on, and this was initially meant to be much shorter than it was. As a result, it is somewhat clumsy in pacing, style, and writing. Please accept my humble apologies.)
Lowell hated his life. Really, he had for a long time, but now even more so, particularly because he was now stuck in a caged wagon left outside that damn cave. Like everyone else in his village, he had accepted the need for a yearly sacrifice to appease the spirit in the cave, right up until that y
Is Something Wrong? Part 2 by 98Sparkz, literature
Literature
Is Something Wrong? Part 2
Kris had awakened several hours later to see it was night time and Jayden hadn't come back yet. He began to worry about his lost friend.
"Oh man, I hope he's alright." Kris began to pace before throwing something on. He burst out the door and into the hallway. "Gotta find he-I mean him." He repeated in his head over and over again.
He reached the plaza of the school and looked around for his friend.
"Where is he? Where is he?" Kris thought when a finger tapped his shoulder. He turned to see Lisa, the girl who Jayden almost fought earlier that day. She smiled at him.
"Hey Kris." She said. "What are you doing?" She asked smiling again.
"Oh
Is Something Wrong? Part 1 by 98Sparkz, literature
Literature
Is Something Wrong? Part 1
Kris and his friend Jayden where the best of friends. Ever since they both roomed together at a boarding school they attended. They did almost everything together. Everything was going great even though Kris was the good guy and Jayden was the schools bad boy. So Kris would usually take the blame being guilty by association whenever Jayden pulled his little stunts.
Kris was slim and fairly tall and had short black hair. His eyes were black while he was fairly tall but still a little short. Jayden was taller than Kris by a few inches and had short blonde hair. His eyes were blue and had muscles but they weren't really big.
"Oh i'm so boooooo